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Welcome to my blog created for “English for Specific Purposes”, a course which helped us to develop team-building skills needed for our on-going practice and learning as a lifelong process. Writing with others implies a co-learning experience where members support and rely on each other to achieve an agreed-upon goal. This virtual space will lead us to reflect upon the role of collaborative writing in our professional development. So, I would like to open this blog mentioning Brown’s (2001) words; “Don’t buy into the myth that writing is a solitary activity! Some of it is, to be sure, but a good deal what makes a good writer can be most effectively learned within a community of learners.”

Thanks to my peer, Nilda Acosta, for sharing this experience with me.

I am looking forward to reading your comments.

viernes, 23 de noviembre de 2012

Essential Sections for Supporting Hypotheses in Research Papers


Essential Sections for Supporting Hypotheses in Research Papers
For behaving as researchers, teachers should possess the writing skills necessary to identify and produce different text-types useful to provide and support evidence for their findings.  In addition, the implementation of these text-types would reflect teachers´ critical thinking and their ability to encode their messages making them accessible to the academic community.  For this reason, this paper aims to make a deep analysis of Results, Discussions and Conclusions sections in order to compare the devices utilized in articles from different fields.
Taking into account the organization of the aforementioned sections included in research papers, Barrs´s (2012) article presents the Results and the Discussion sections written separately, being the last section implied under the heading of Limitations.  Similarly, in Aspelund´s et al. (2010) paper, the two sections are written in a separate way.  Furthermore, in the work previously mentioned it can be assumed that the Discussions section comprises sub-headings as Strengths and Limitations; and Conclusion.
 It is worth mentioning that in Discussions sections from both papers, de-personalized statements are avoided since researchers from the two articles assume responsibilities for their findings using the first person singular in Barrs´s (2012) case and first person plural in Aspelund´s et al. (2010) work; for example, expressing “we also found that advanced stages...” (p. 5).  Additionally, a wide variety of reporting verbs are used to enrich the evaluative comments made by the researchers when analyzing advantages and drawbacks of the procedures followed in both studies.
Aspelund et al. (2010) include the main findings in the Results section using past tense and comparative adjectives.  For example, they state that “people with chronic kidney disease had higher mean levels of cardiovascular risk factors than did people without chronic kidney disease” (p. 3).  The main findings in Barrs´s (2012) work are divided into two sub-sections: the 1st and the 2nd period of action research.  In both sub-sections, it can be observed that there are explanations anticipating a further discussion on a specific topic by means of phrases like “see the limitation section for a discussion of this” (p. 17).
Swales (1990) states that tables and/or figures are used in the Results section to summarize data.   Barrs (2012) uses eight numbered tables in the Results section and cites them in the text using a repeated phrase like “as can be seen from the data in Table ...” (p. 16).  In contrast, Aspelund et al. (2010) include tables and figures and place the reference to them between brackets after mentioning the obtained data. These researchers support evidence alluding to varied formats of visual aids mentioning analogies among them; for example, it can be observed that figures 1 parallels table 3 and web table C (p. 3).  
Analyzing notes for tables, it could be assumed that Aspelund´s et al. (2010) work makes use of notes for uncommon concepts as “estimated glomerular filtration rate (eGFR)” (p. 3).  By contrast, these authors do not expand the meaning of the acronym for standard deviation (SD) assuming it can be deduced from statistical previous knowledge.  On the other hand, this type of notes is not used by Barrs (2012) since he shows the data by means of tables with percentages without relying on statistical resources.
Persuasive and argumentative text is used to write Conclusions sections in research papers.  In this case, Barrs (2012) and Aspelund et al. (2010) employ that text-type to produce their respective conclusions.  Though, Barrs (2012) also includes, the cause-effect relationship by means of a preposition stating that “[it was shown that students] participated in the project because of the desire to stay in contact with classmates and to practice their English skills” (p.22).  Likewise, Aspelund et al. (2010) establish that “stages of chronic kidney disease are associated with excess risk of subsequent coronary heart disease” (p.6). 
In the analysis of the researchers´ attitude towards their findings, Barrs (2012) is careful about making strong conclusions, instead statements expressing probability are introduced by means of modal verbs such as “this would suggest that [Computer-Mediated Communication] (CMC) projects ... can be of value” (p.22).  Aspelund et al. (2010) apply a similar strategy stating “assessment of ... modestly improves...” (p.6).  Consequently, expressions of tentative language which denote distance are recurrent not only in Results and Discussions sections but also in Conclusions sections from both articles.
Promoting further research is another objective of the Conclusions section in research papers.  Aspelund et al. (2010) advise that “further studies are needed to investigate associations between chronic kidney disease and non-vascular mortality from causes other than cancer” (p. 6).  Similarly, Barrs (2012) argues that “[certain programme] could be an area of further investigation in that a teacher may like to research whether or not there is a development in English ability through the use of such a programme” (p. 22).
On the whole, it can be stated that research papers are considered effective means by which professionals can share their experiences in their field of study.  For that reason, results, discussions and conclusions in a research paper should be presented clear and objectively.  Consequently, it is crucial to be acquainted with the characteristic layout and linguistic tools used for that purpose in each of those sections.  This fact will contribute to being able to interpret different text-types and produce the appropriate one in each case.

                                                             References
Aspelund, T. ,et al (2010). Chronic kidney disease and risk of major cardiovascular disease and non-vascular mortality: prospective population based cohort study. BMJ;341:c4986. doi: 10.1136/bmj.c4986
Barrs, K. (2012). Fostering computer-mediated L2 interaction beyond the classroom. Language, Learning &Technology, 16(1), 10-25. Retrieved April, 2012 from
Swales, J.M. (1990). Genre analysis: English in academic and research settings. (Cambridge Applied Linguistics Series). Cambridge, UK: Cambridge University Press.

    










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